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The research skills tutorial

Avoiding Poor Thesis Statements

This thesis statement is to vague and broad


It is important not only to have a thesis statement, but to have a good one. An inadequate thesis statement is almost as bad as not having one at all.

Below and on the next few pages are examples of thesis statements you'll want to avoid -- because they'll lead to weak papers with poor grades:


Man has had a major impact on the environment